UUhhh...
Since I'm not too good about saying whats good, I'll do the bad things.
The music sounded like a guy was whacking his paino with a banana.
(It still suited the mood though...)
The end story didn't really go anywhere. It wasn't depressing, just... umm... weird.
It kinda seemd you had a good startup idea, but then didn't know where to go from there.
It was ok. Not good, not bad, just ok.
(I wonder if I should give advice, not telling people what not to do)
2/5
>> Kritz